Feedback Visions In the Haunted Ledger Horror Movie Screenplay written by Vanessa M. Chattman pitch deck

[VanessaMChattman]

 

[Zoltan]

Hi Vanessa, thanks for sharing your project. The pitch deck gives us a first look at the concept, but it would be helpful if you could add a few words about where the project currently stands and what you’re looking for here on FilmPlatforms. Are you looking for feedback on the screenplay or pitch deck, a producer, financing, or other collaborators?

The clearer you are about what you need, the easier it is for other members to offer useful feedback or potentially connect with the project.

 

[VanessaMChattman]

I'm looking for feedback from producers, directors or investors.

 

[VanessaMChattman]

Also, My horror project, Visions in the Haunted Ledger was recently selected for a Nominee Award in the Boston Indie Film Festival for Best Narrative Short on September 28th, 2026.

 

[Zoltan]

Congratulations on the nomination, Vanessa! That’s definitely worth highlighting as part of the project’s presentation.

As a next step, it could be useful to add a short “project snapshot” alongside the image. There’s no need to share the full pitch deck or screenplay even a single page or a few short paragraphs would be enough: what the story is about, where the project currently stands, and what you hope the next step will be.

That gives anyone visiting the thread a quick understanding of the project and something concrete to respond to.

 

[VanessaMChattman]

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Vanessa M Chattman's unproduced horror film project titled, Visions in the Haunted Ledger Logline and synopsis is printed at the top of this pitch deck next to the candle.

 

[Anderson-Mark-Ian]

I love the concept of this and it genuinely sounds intriguing. The pitch deck you presented is great for a visual breakdown of the synopsis but, I would also have loved to have seen a small snippet about the main character to help those looking to be involved, understand there is more to just the logline and synopsis (suggestion only).

The actual visuals are fantastic but take the focus away from the actual writing. It is very compact. Maybe having the logline and synopsis separate to the images if possible. This was evidenced by Zaltán AND myself almost missing the fact they were there in the first place.

I'd be happy to share my own pitch deck to help?

Either way though - loving the logline! Genuinely has me interested to see a little more!

Good luck with it all!

- Mark

 

[VanessaMChattman]

Congratulations on the nomination, Vanessa! That’s definitely worth highlighting as part of the project’s presentation.

As a next step, it could be useful to add a short “project snapshot” alongside the image. There’s no need to share the full pitch deck or screenplay even a single page or a few short paragraphs would be enough: what the story is about, where the project currently stands, and what you hope the next step will be.

That gives anyone visiting the thread a quick understanding of the project and something concrete to respond to.

Thank you very much

 

[norwest]

Also, My horror project, Visions in the Haunted Ledger was recently selected for a Nominee Award in the Boston Indie Film Festival for Best Narrative Short on September 28th, 2026.

Hi Vanessa,

One thing caught my attention. You mentioned that Visions in the Haunted Ledger is still unproduced, but that it also received a Best Narrative Short nomination at the Boston Indie Film Festival.

Was the nomination for the screenplay, or is there already a completed short-film version?

I think clarifying this could be helpful for producers and potential collaborators, as it would give them a better understanding of the project's current stage and what you're looking to develop next.